Sunday, December 21, 2014

Come in summer

Come in summer!
passed by in spring, have already come in summer.
ha ha ha!Finally come in summer!I jump for joy.
in summer, the lotus flower opened, I appreciate lotus flower, the fragrant and in fine threads mentally refreshing of lotus flower
pond the inside Be full to is fingerling son and chicken lobster rice, we get ah get, get a lot of!It is really happy.
I like summer! 1, the praise sing the praises a method Various plants all have their own characteristicses, such as green loose not afraid strict cold, willow everywhere growth, lotus dirty mire but don't dye, the laurel blossom joss-stick floats ten inside, stay Fang the human life, the weed contains stubborn vitality, plant of the characteristicses usually make us associate how to get along with people.If see a lotus dirty mire but don't dye, we can associate and make a conflict to the unhealthy tendency;See the weed contain stubborn vitality, we can associate to be a person have to be not afraid of a difficulty, Be not afraid of frustrate praise to sing the praises a method be carry on praising to the characteristicses of the plant.The adoption praise sings the praises a method and wants first to plant of can associate how do the characteristics of the person and carry on concrete depiction, and pierce through full text with this, so then the center in the article can be outstanding.Secondly want to express feelings for lauding in the article, write an oneself's emotion in the depiction plant, so just can feeling person.In addition still need to notice beginning and end to act in cooperation, outstanding praise. 2, the static state sketch a method The shape of animal includes body, hair color, head, arms and legs, eyes, ear, and tail...etc..Different animal, body of each constitute part different, for example bird only have two feet, but have a rightness of wings;The fish has no feet, but not scale and fin.The static state sketches a method be animal static state the shape of each part and the characteristics of the color write out.Adopt this method to describe an animal, want to cautiously observe first, distinguish the color of the animal each part to have what different.(Next 88)secondly want to find out the characteristics of each part shape.Make use of in addition fitting parable.Thus, can make the reader seem the sketch painting of seeing an animal. 3, the total cent knot legal Adopt a total cent to combine a method description animal, notice to always say and describe of relate to.Describe part important tightly surround to always say the characteristics spoken of depiction.If always say is to speak the beauty of animal, describe parts to all want to surround beauty to write;If always say is speak an animal of vivid, describing the part will surround its vivid come to write.In addition describing part has to there is certain sequence, or from up arrived a bottom, or first after the shape color, or first and in the center behind both sides, must be orderly. 4, characteristic for instance method Adopt characteristic for instance when the method describe an animal generally and first point out an animal of some on the other hand characteristics, then raise concrete example to take into to confirm.Adopting this method to describe an animal has to notice to hold tight most can reflect the characteristics of the aspect of animal, and want to write concretely as far as possible, making reader feel can believe. 5, the characteristic explain a method Adopt characteristic elucidation the method describe an animal, some one characteristic generally and first introduce an animal, then the function that explains it, or why does the elucidation have this characteristic.Immediately after adopt the same method to one by one introduce other characteristics of animal.Adopt this method to describe an animal, notice science, have to have a basis, can not adopt to think a matter of course method to take into to explain.For improving a writing skill, we want to notice to read more section Pu to read a thing and understand the temperament of animal.

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