in the life, detail have no place not at.A grain of Niu buttons up on the lounge suit of fasten and spread, hang up in telephone who first who after, sit who left who right, all display a kind of poise and self-restraint.Record a Xu text detail within text equally, slightly more order to dye, as well the ability is colourful, show fine United States.
first, make use of detail depiction abundant topic thought.
the Lu was fast to once have to the detail thus of review to say:scrutinize one vulture Lan, one painting Chu, although is small, the income is clearer, pushes with this again and all, feel hence adding more is practical.Such as can need to carry on process, refining to the detail according to the topic, the idea Yun then is more abundant.If 《medicine 》 writes a person blood plain wheat roll from fresh and red become jet black, finally burnt skin in flee one white spirit, white spirit spread, is two plain wheat rolls of white wheat flours.Not only suggest summer Yu from kill be eaten of process, also the concealed Yu wears the blood of revolution because the crowd's ignorant numbness but the white flow of deep righteousness.
four times read Dao bore such as owner in the hotel in 《bore B F 》 again B F still owe 19 money, this language detail not only wrote the bore is in the position in the people's heart of low, also live to draw at that time social following upon success or failure.
depict person image through a detail depiction secondly.
the successful detail depiction is like a fascinating close-up lens, can have the function to enlarge, expand, can
the part of the person most hypostatic the unseen announce to public, convex now person soul.Such as write Su Wu Shou Chi's stanza Zhang for many times in 《empress man book Su Wu Zhuan 》 :
hold stanza to send to The Huns to make, Zhang man the stanza shepherd and start to lie to hold stanza, the Lu hair to the utmost falls.
man stanza, should be common thing, but Be with meticulous care described by author, again and again exaggerate, have already become Su martial rather die than surrender, loyalty not the spirit symbol of Yu.
write beam to living the detail that the treasure pays noodle soup money in 《start a business history 》 such as Liu Qing again:
he beats satisfied Ge, dismantles the brooch of quilted jacket pocket and takes out a red cloth packet.He opens red cloth packet very carefully on the dining table, and then opens the 1 F once wrote of paper, just take out those seven put together eight Reminbi that the ground gathers together of gathering togethers, take out for a five cents, ticket, paid noodle soup money.
a chain of action details all display beam to living a treasure here sincerely small carefully tiny personality characteristic, and can even express his thrifty as for thin things like paper,etc that assist with the brooch, red cloth packet and once wrote, elaboration.
other like language detail, a master of Run soil calls in 《home town 》 he thoughts the grade idea of deep place;Dress detail, breaking of bore B F long gown wore his poor and self-contained;Expression detail, the smile break into laughter of one face of Liu and Jean she the docile and sincerity of heart bottom.
ask for help of the detail depiction push details development again.
know to all, public security official's personnel solves even some clueses all don't pass;Because touch melon can usually obtain important breakthrough from the agreeable rattan of these detail bodies.As long as you throw properly, the small pebble can also arise 1000 F wave.Catch a cold such as 《Chen Huan livings city 》 this detail is an author to with meticulous care set up.Just think, Chen isn't suffer from catching a cold hard meet by coincidence secretary Wu, meet not last secretary Wu how can stay for a night again, the deluxe room of 5 dollars, live not up deluxe room Chen again how will have a series of boredom to make mean spirited performance, he again how will return to show to the village person?Take a wide view full text, catch a cold this detail lie on the station bench of Chen Huan livinged to in clear and ordered patternly send into deluxe room, it not only made a show of the personality of person, but also make story details include an unexpected development, is went to change person destiny.
certainly, the detail cans not at will add, either.It needs to be scooped out hard, with meticulous care design, then can is colourful.
Saturday, January 3, 2015
The story of tooth
The story of tooth
the dental braces record(a)
morning, the aunt took me to go to a new China hospital.
after we arrive, the aunt went first dentistry to register.Then, took me to walk into dentistry.My doctor surname often, her request to the tooth is very scathing.Aunt explained my circumstance to her, the doctor made me open a mouth and saw my tooth.She says that I am a congenital missing tooth, need to line up first all teeth forward and tightly, so as to fill dental cavity.After I listenned to, the flash across in brain is many to float to think, putting on the dental braces will can't be like other people to say so, can not have a meal for many days.Or what also not edible, edibles soft food.Still already brush teeth again how should brush?
quickly lie like!The ear spreads doctor scathing voice beside.I see the thing and a bowl that the doctor take out two iron a bucket after lying down.She opens a bucket to put the powder in one Shao blue into a bowl, again become powder with water paste, then has a top in iron.Finish doing these, she stuffs into iron my mouth, let my tooth print in the top, another iron has to also do like this.
print the model of good tooth, she and then wash a tooth clearly for me, will some whet to go, end, she took out to shoot camera to clap my tooth.
the work prefaces all finish doing, she says to me:Had a meal each time, must brush teeth, want to brush for three minutes each time, next time come me can want a check, don't hastily.Because she is an expert, all very busy every day, so she sees aunt good time go to hospital, can in no way attend early or be late.
the dental braces record(two)
today, and then want go to hospital.I am some frightened, because I feel to wear dental braces to must be very painful.
the hospital arrived, the doctor made us wait for a second first, because of previous haven't completed.About led for 20 minutes, the doctor made me lie well, she prepared a device.She first will an an of of metal material fixedly on my tooth, put a wire of about five Li rices into those metal materials again, tail after hang up on my molar teeth.I think like this good.The doctor takes out the wire of root flection again and use a the pincers betwixt one of Mao clip tightly, then the set is on my tooth and by leap and bound turn pincers, the wire Ning is tight.Each tooth Ning good, but the wire is a bit long, so the doctor took out a pair of scissors again, surplus of the wire shear to go one by one, again stuff into wire head to sew with the small stick in.
finally completed, the doctor gave repeated advice to me:The notter edible hard food to notice while brushing teeth, if the wire head came out, press into it.These several days, just completed probably don't adapt to, will be more painful, lead for a 23 days good.Brush teeth to be good friends with to brush so much!
I say to the aunt:Does that brush teeth to break dental braces?Need not worry, the doctor is affirmative to all complete.The aunt answered.
took leave a doctor, walked on the way home, I had a kind of unspeakable felling and seemed to be a bit happy.Can I also not know why I have to be happy!
the dental braces record(three)
put on the second day of dental braces, my tooth started a pain.Eat noodles at noon, I can not also eat!
noon, the aunt did slice son Chuan.I picked up chopsticks to eat, can chopsticks on carelessly running into a tooth, can be really painful!I don't want to eat, because the chopsticks send to noodles to run into a tooth and really can not stand.Can no matter how it is, I this always musts eat, either!That isn't hungry to develop trouble.I endure ache to gingerly eat noodles and ate about one lesser half, the aunt says to me:If really can not eat, that you drink soup!Drinking the soup will also run into a bowl, however compare eat noodles like 1:00.Hence, I finish drinking soup.
dinner, the aunt did cellophane noodles soup for me, I ate a lot.Luckily the aunt does of rice is softer, otherwise I didn't know how to have a meal.The relation of tooth, so I have a meal to chew and have to directly descend to swallow.If rice is also hard, can not directly swallow.
have a meal, I brushed teeth and discovered that my lips are all whetted to break or whole is a wire of print son.Once I run into those bubbles, will feel very painful.Can this how again?For the sake of good-looking, and then have what way?This pain and sufferings still doesn't calculate what, hereafter grow a tooth Be getting more painful.
ah, originally I feel that wearing dental braces is pretty divertive.I just feel now that wearing dental braces is true painful!
the dental braces record(a)
morning, the aunt took me to go to a new China hospital.
after we arrive, the aunt went first dentistry to register.Then, took me to walk into dentistry.My doctor surname often, her request to the tooth is very scathing.Aunt explained my circumstance to her, the doctor made me open a mouth and saw my tooth.She says that I am a congenital missing tooth, need to line up first all teeth forward and tightly, so as to fill dental cavity.After I listenned to, the flash across in brain is many to float to think, putting on the dental braces will can't be like other people to say so, can not have a meal for many days.Or what also not edible, edibles soft food.Still already brush teeth again how should brush?
quickly lie like!The ear spreads doctor scathing voice beside.I see the thing and a bowl that the doctor take out two iron a bucket after lying down.She opens a bucket to put the powder in one Shao blue into a bowl, again become powder with water paste, then has a top in iron.Finish doing these, she stuffs into iron my mouth, let my tooth print in the top, another iron has to also do like this.
print the model of good tooth, she and then wash a tooth clearly for me, will some whet to go, end, she took out to shoot camera to clap my tooth.
the work prefaces all finish doing, she says to me:Had a meal each time, must brush teeth, want to brush for three minutes each time, next time come me can want a check, don't hastily.Because she is an expert, all very busy every day, so she sees aunt good time go to hospital, can in no way attend early or be late.
the dental braces record(two)
today, and then want go to hospital.I am some frightened, because I feel to wear dental braces to must be very painful.
the hospital arrived, the doctor made us wait for a second first, because of previous haven't completed.About led for 20 minutes, the doctor made me lie well, she prepared a device.She first will an an of of metal material fixedly on my tooth, put a wire of about five Li rices into those metal materials again, tail after hang up on my molar teeth.I think like this good.The doctor takes out the wire of root flection again and use a the pincers betwixt one of Mao clip tightly, then the set is on my tooth and by leap and bound turn pincers, the wire Ning is tight.Each tooth Ning good, but the wire is a bit long, so the doctor took out a pair of scissors again, surplus of the wire shear to go one by one, again stuff into wire head to sew with the small stick in.
finally completed, the doctor gave repeated advice to me:The notter edible hard food to notice while brushing teeth, if the wire head came out, press into it.These several days, just completed probably don't adapt to, will be more painful, lead for a 23 days good.Brush teeth to be good friends with to brush so much!
I say to the aunt:Does that brush teeth to break dental braces?Need not worry, the doctor is affirmative to all complete.The aunt answered.
took leave a doctor, walked on the way home, I had a kind of unspeakable felling and seemed to be a bit happy.Can I also not know why I have to be happy!
the dental braces record(three)
put on the second day of dental braces, my tooth started a pain.Eat noodles at noon, I can not also eat!
noon, the aunt did slice son Chuan.I picked up chopsticks to eat, can chopsticks on carelessly running into a tooth, can be really painful!I don't want to eat, because the chopsticks send to noodles to run into a tooth and really can not stand.Can no matter how it is, I this always musts eat, either!That isn't hungry to develop trouble.I endure ache to gingerly eat noodles and ate about one lesser half, the aunt says to me:If really can not eat, that you drink soup!Drinking the soup will also run into a bowl, however compare eat noodles like 1:00.Hence, I finish drinking soup.
dinner, the aunt did cellophane noodles soup for me, I ate a lot.Luckily the aunt does of rice is softer, otherwise I didn't know how to have a meal.The relation of tooth, so I have a meal to chew and have to directly descend to swallow.If rice is also hard, can not directly swallow.
have a meal, I brushed teeth and discovered that my lips are all whetted to break or whole is a wire of print son.Once I run into those bubbles, will feel very painful.Can this how again?For the sake of good-looking, and then have what way?This pain and sufferings still doesn't calculate what, hereafter grow a tooth Be getting more painful.
ah, originally I feel that wearing dental braces is pretty divertive.I just feel now that wearing dental braces is true painful!
beautiful campus
beautiful campus
our campuses be been located treasure in the middle of the Guo road lying of segment Long Si's community, here the north depends a verdant northern ascent, south depend on wind around to flow to drip of Wei river, the campus surrounding green tree surrounds, school colorful decoration, birds' twitter and fragrance of flower, is the good place of our study and life.
walk up door in the school, our head quarter sees a kind aunt Wei and a dominant public security uncle in the door, they open the door on time for us every day, lock door, passionately greet us to walk into campus every day, again the concern ground escorts us to leave schools to go home, is that they guard us together with teacher and support the safety of campus, we feel very trust, so, we appreciate them very much from the in the mind and have a passion for them.
morning, whenever while walking into campus, I will hear a studying of the classmates Lang Lang voice and see their strain having preface ground to sweep campus hygiene.The classmates 66 continuously and continuously arrive at a school, the campus then became we study to study, game association, toughen the paradise of growth.Our campuses aren't big, square, square, just positive yard, the north is the teaching mansion of 4 F, the west is the night of 2 F to do building, the south is a toilet, and the east is the experiment building of door in the school and 2 F.From the campus inside of set up achievement stone tablet up know, these buildings all set up in 1993 and it may be said experienced successively a rains and winds vicissitudes of life.Although calculate not last brand-new, after this year repairing of a holidays, each floors all already stick last pure and shining ceramic tile wall skirt, and building way inside of virtuous teach long gallery and culture grow a packing of gallery point and make the whole campus again shining brilliant of brilliance.We progressively investigate in the laboratory, at dance room heartily dance, write splash-ink in the calligraphy room, put a voice to sing in music room, design a fine blue print in the tiny machine room abundant colorful campus culture make our life versatile, its joy is endless.
the center in the campus, stand erect colorful five planets red flag, we look at five planets red flag, solemnly brigade gift in the line, sing the great song of《sing a motherland 》 , matchless excited and proud of in the heart, we once signed life ambition:Struggle for carrying out a China the great renew of the clan but making great effort!A side of the flagpole is robust Gao Da Dun, again weather-beaten pine tree.It the heavy leaf is luxuriant, the perfectly straight outstandingly stand erect in the campus, don't avoid strict cold intense heat, Kui however immobility.In summer, it covers for us the hot sun of fire, bringing us the one is fresh and cool;In winter, it holds up to shout for us of north wind, make us little to catch cold breeze of bullying of cold snow.The yard plants various plants on all sides and have the magnolia, lilac, crape myrtle and maple leaf Lee and peony etc..On arriving spring, various flowers all competitively open, various flowers just like we a piece is brilliant of smiling face.
after teaching building, is our big drill grounds.On arriving athletics lesson and movable lesson, here become happiness of ocean.We are in the drill ground running, do gymnastics, play ping-pong, jump skin Jin, throw sandbag, kick a shuttlecock and skip rope, play on a swing, do a game at this time, joys voice the joke overflow full the whole campus.
, our beautiful campus, lovely campus!
the composition point review:The little author melts feeling at the view and lends view sentiment and delicately described campus lovely view, and vividly described teachers and the students in the campus various abundant colorful activity, the action combines, benefit by association together, wit and humour is full of life, a good article.
guide a teacher:A junior high school of Wu Li Qiang tests a composition and mostly includes a few steps:Review a purpose to choose a material to strive for a layout display literary grace.Strive for a layout this one-step solution among them of is how to arrange the problem of contents that contents and performance chooses.Arrange a contents mainly is to conceive outline the big structure and big frame of article for the material chosen, but express a contents then mainly is express a student by himself/herself to the comprehension and ego personality of material.I think that this is the beginning high school student should first explicit idea. Arranging the contents is the big frame that installs an article.Test a composition but speech for one, very sad urge of, the student has to follow give square the space a word a word upwards write.(Next 88)is also say, test a composition disallows an examinee truely and thoroughly exertion.The examinee's exertion have to under the mode fixed, these writings' making a show of in the square, square,'s just positive blank would seem to be enjoy to please the eye.But this needs to strive for an effort of layout. In the process of striving for a layout, it is the most important one step to write to lift a key link.Write to lift outline to notice two contentses:On being certain article topic and main contents, two is to give the article layering the cent segment, make sure at the same time contents each ly and mostly with probably word number.This lifts a key link ignore is truely write paper up still only in mind beat into a mental notes, have to promise ability at lifts and orderly puts in the key link into want to put of contents.The parable that beats an image, be have to have a big cupboard, there is the small blank of dissimilarity in each cupboard.Have to check a time of small space after filling with each small space a contents, will fill the too full place be divided into a lately small space again, will fill once big pen in the dissatisfied place(is also make a show of to the article to say a not strong place of performance dint) flick and sign a horse to hew away.This is to arrange a contents matter that need to be done.
beautiful campus
our campuses be been located treasure in the middle of the Guo road lying of segment Long Si's community, here the north depends a verdant northern ascent, south depend on wind around to flow to drip of Wei river, the campus surrounding green tree surrounds, school colorful decoration, birds' twitter and fragrance of flower, is the good place of our study and life.
walk up door in the school, our head quarter sees a kind aunt Wei and a dominant public security uncle in the door, they open the door on time for us every day, lock door, passionately greet us to walk into campus every day, again the concern ground escorts us to leave schools to go home, is that they guard us together with teacher and support the safety of campus, we feel very trust, so, we appreciate them very much from the in the mind and have a passion for them.
morning, whenever while walking into campus, I will hear a studying of the classmates Lang Lang voice and see their strain having preface ground to sweep campus hygiene.The classmates 66 continuously and continuously arrive at a school, the campus then became we study to study, game association, toughen the paradise of growth.Our campuses aren't big, square, square, just positive yard, the north is the teaching mansion of 4 F, the west is the night of 2 F to do building, the south is a toilet, and the east is the experiment building of door in the school and 2 F.From the campus inside of set up achievement stone tablet up know, these buildings all set up in 1993 and it may be said experienced successively a rains and winds vicissitudes of life.Although calculate not last brand-new, after this year repairing of a holidays, each floors all already stick last pure and shining ceramic tile wall skirt, and building way inside of virtuous teach long gallery and culture grow a packing of gallery point and make the whole campus again shining brilliant of brilliance.We progressively investigate in the laboratory, at dance room heartily dance, write splash-ink in the calligraphy room, put a voice to sing in music room, design a fine blue print in the tiny machine room abundant colorful campus culture make our life versatile, its joy is endless.
the center in the campus, stand erect colorful five planets red flag, we look at five planets red flag, solemnly brigade gift in the line, sing the great song of《sing a motherland 》 , matchless excited and proud of in the heart, we once signed life ambition:Struggle for carrying out a China the great renew of the clan but making great effort!A side of the flagpole is robust Gao Da Dun, again weather-beaten pine tree.It the heavy leaf is luxuriant, the perfectly straight outstandingly stand erect in the campus, don't avoid strict cold intense heat, Kui however immobility.In summer, it covers for us the hot sun of fire, bringing us the one is fresh and cool;In winter, it holds up to shout for us of north wind, make us little to catch cold breeze of bullying of cold snow.The yard plants various plants on all sides and have the magnolia, lilac, crape myrtle and maple leaf Lee and peony etc..On arriving spring, various flowers all competitively open, various flowers just like we a piece is brilliant of smiling face.
after teaching building, is our big drill grounds.On arriving athletics lesson and movable lesson, here become happiness of ocean.We are in the drill ground running, do gymnastics, play ping-pong, jump skin Jin, throw sandbag, kick a shuttlecock and skip rope, play on a swing, do a game at this time, joys voice the joke overflow full the whole campus.
, our beautiful campus, lovely campus!
the composition point review:The little author melts feeling at the view and lends view sentiment and delicately described campus lovely view, and vividly described teachers and the students in the campus various abundant colorful activity, the action combines, benefit by association together, wit and humour is full of life, a good article.
guide a teacher:A junior high school of Wu Li Qiang tests a composition and mostly includes a few steps:Review a purpose to choose a material to strive for a layout display literary grace.Strive for a layout this one-step solution among them of is how to arrange the problem of contents that contents and performance chooses.Arrange a contents mainly is to conceive outline the big structure and big frame of article for the material chosen, but express a contents then mainly is express a student by himself/herself to the comprehension and ego personality of material.I think that this is the beginning high school student should first explicit idea. Arranging the contents is the big frame that installs an article.Test a composition but speech for one, very sad urge of, the student has to follow give square the space a word a word upwards write.(Next 88)is also say, test a composition disallows an examinee truely and thoroughly exertion.The examinee's exertion have to under the mode fixed, these writings' making a show of in the square, square,'s just positive blank would seem to be enjoy to please the eye.But this needs to strive for an effort of layout. In the process of striving for a layout, it is the most important one step to write to lift a key link.Write to lift outline to notice two contentses:On being certain article topic and main contents, two is to give the article layering the cent segment, make sure at the same time contents each ly and mostly with probably word number.This lifts a key link ignore is truely write paper up still only in mind beat into a mental notes, have to promise ability at lifts and orderly puts in the key link into want to put of contents.The parable that beats an image, be have to have a big cupboard, there is the small blank of dissimilarity in each cupboard.Have to check a time of small space after filling with each small space a contents, will fill the too full place be divided into a lately small space again, will fill once big pen in the dissatisfied place(is also make a show of to the article to say a not strong place of performance dint) flick and sign a horse to hew away.This is to arrange a contents matter that need to be done.
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